在翻譯中怎樣避免中式英語?

　　很多人有著扎實的英語基礎(chǔ)，但是在進行英語翻譯工作時，總會出現(xiàn)一些中式英語，那么譯員在翻譯中怎樣避免中式英語呢，下面翻譯公司小編帶大家了解一下!

　　Many people have a solid foundation in English, but in English translation, there will always be some Chinglish, so how can translators avoid Chinglish in translation? Let's take a look at it!

　　1、正確翻譯“使”字句和“讓”字句

　　1. Correct translation of "make" and "make"

　　在翻譯“使”字句和“讓”字句時，譯者容易受原文影響，可嘗試用如下方式來改：

　　When translating the sentence of "make" and the sentence of "let", the translator is easily influenced by the original text, and can try to change it in the following ways:

　　其一，省略“使”字或“讓”字，在譯文中添加表示邏輯關(guān)系的詞(組)，來體現(xiàn)“使”字或“讓”字的前后文之間的邏輯關(guān)系;

　　First, omit the word "make" or "let" and add words (groups) representing logical relations in the translation to reflect the logical relations between the preceding and the following texts of the word "make" or "let";

　　其二，將“使”字或“讓”字與其后面的動詞結(jié)合起來譯為英語及物動詞(或詞組)。

　　Second, translate the word "zhe" or "Rang" into English transitive verbs (or phrases) by combining it with the verbs after it.

　　2、避免動詞使用過多

　　2. Avoid overuse of verbs

　　漢語中往往分句密集，動詞的出現(xiàn)頻率較高。漢語中還有“連動式”和“兼語式”結(jié)構(gòu)，句子中集結(jié)了大量的動詞。英語往往只使用一個動詞來表達最主要的動作含義，其他動作則通常借助動詞不定式、分詞、名詞、介詞、形容詞等來表達。

　　In Chinese, there are often many clauses and verbs. In Chinese, there are two kinds of structures, one is "Liandong" and the other is "Jianyu". English usually uses only one verb to express the most important action meaning, while other actions are usually expressed by infinitive, participle, noun, preposition, adjective, etc.

　　3、避免過多重復信息

　　3. Avoid too much duplicate information

　　對于漢語中的重復信息，譯者在漢譯英時可嘗試采用如下方式：

　　For the repeated information in Chinese, the translator can try to use the following methods when translating Chinese into English:

　　其一，對重復出現(xiàn)的信息加以省略，比如在結(jié)構(gòu)相同的、平行的漢語簡單句中，重復的謂語動詞在漢譯英時可以省略不譯;

　　Firstly, the repeated information should be omitted. For example, in the same and parallel Chinese simple sentences, the repeated predicate verbs can be omitted when they are translated into English;

　　其二，用英語代詞或其他詞來替代漢語中重復出現(xiàn)的信息;

　　Secondly, English pronouns or other words are used to replace the repeated information in Chinese;

　　其三，采取類似“合并同類項”的方法(即把多項式中的同類項合并成一項)，將漢語中重復的詞語或信息提取出來，合并為“一項”來翻譯，這“一項”可加在全部有關(guān)詞語或信息的前面或后面，統(tǒng)籌兼顧。

　　Third, adopt the method similar to "merge the same items" (that is, merge the same items in polynomials into one item), extract the repeated words or information in Chinese, and merge them into "one item" for translation. This "one item" can be added to the front or back of all relevant words or information for overall consideration.

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